My writing this week!

This week we have been doing another writing challenge. This challenge is about the last week writing challenge were we had to get lots of points to get 30 minutes free time. I didn't beat my last week's points but its fine.

Here is my writing, check it out:

The winter writing

It’s a chilly, freezing day and as the snow quickly falls on the trees, the ground, the hot blooded animals appears out from their secret hideout and the king of winter is here.

‘Crunch,’ as the king of winter stomps on the clear, frozen, and slippery pathway, as he tries not to injure himself on the icy pathway.

As the cold wind pushes the  dried leaves from the tree the snow from it slowly goes down on the ground. The land is frozen like antarctica.

Some animals making noises and wandering around in the frozen place. Others are dying because of coldness.

The day has finally come to an end, the sun has set and now it stopped snowing and some animals are warm now.