My Piece of hard work

This week we had been doing lots of reading and blooms task and if we have finished all the task we pick one task to post in our blogs and I picked this one because I feel like this is the longest reading tasks I did.

Please give me some positive feedback.

Here is my work, check it out:

Blooms:

Blooms 1: KC

1. Why did mum blamed Mr Fowles? Mum blamed Mr Fowles because her son was sick of the adjectives and things like that.
2. Why did the main character hate Mr Fowles? He hates Mr Fowles because Mr Fowles kept giving adjectives.
3. Was mum being to worried about him? Yes mum was being to worried about him.

Bloom 2: KA

1. Mum took him to a doctor
2. The doctor was explaining why he was getting sick of words
3. Shane and him fought
4. They went back home and mum kept complaining about Mr Fowles and the main character had to rinse his mouth
5. The police went to him and he asked how the burglar was like and he couldn’t describe him

Bloom 3: KB

Mum is a very loving mum. She is always worried about her young son.

She is too worried if something small happens to her son.

She has blond her and looks young. She wears a blue dress. She lives with her son and her husband.

Bloom 4: CA

1. Doctor - A person who helps sick people and works at a hospital.
2. Mum - A lady who raised you and takes care of you and who gave birth to you.
3. Biscuit - A different type of food. Can be small or big
4. Tall - A person or something is high

Bloom  5: EB

In my opinion I think this can happen in real life because a mum can be really worried and a person can get sick of tired of adjectives. Also people are different so that's why I think this can happen in real life.

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Other Blooms:

Bloom 1: KC

1. Main Character
2. Mum
3. Dad
4. Mr Fowles
5. Police Man
6. Burglar

Bloom 2: CA

Adjectives	Noun
Can describe lots of things Not the name of people and other things Adjectives are used to describe nouns	Not really can describe lots of things Nouns are names of people and other things Nouns are not used to describe adjectives

Bloom 3: AA

1. I can’t even say an adjective
2. My mum is really worried about me
3. I had to go to 4 doctors
4. I tried to beat shane
5. I am a teen
6. I am not allowed to talk to shane for 3 days

What am I? I am the main character

Bloom 4: AnB

Main Character	Shane
Trying to win too Mum is really worried Not that responsible for his things	Trying to win Mum is not that worried Is responsible for his things

Bloom 5: NIA

Poem:

Bloom 6: EA

I rate this text a 6 out of 10 because its interesting and I actually relate to this story and also because there are lots of adjectives in this text.

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Orientation:
Openining: The opening is they were in a doctors office because his mum was worried about him because he was not feeling well about the adjectives.

Problem: The main character couldn’t think of any adjective and that he gets sick of the adjectives. Also that he saw a burglar in his neighbours house.

Solution: The solution of the adjective was that he had to not go to school and he had to rinse his mouth all the time. The solution of the burglar was that he called the police.

Conclusion: The conclusion was that he just didn’t say anything to the police because he couldn’t think of any adjectives to describe the burglar.

Summary:

This week we have been reading a book called Weapons of Mass Description.

The author of the story is Anna Kenna.

The story is about a boy that hates adjectives and he needed to go see 4 doctors because his mum was really worried about him. Also that he had a fight with a boy called Shane because of the adjectives.

The problem was that he fought with Shane and that he saw a burglar in his neighbours house.

The story took place in the school,house, and the doctor's office and like the candy shop.

Shane and him didn’t talk to each other for three days and they didn’t fight anymore. He called the police of that the burglar could get caught.