The poster I made about Kereru

This week we have been reading about Kaupapa Kereru and when we have finished all the tasks we get to choose one task that we made and post it to our blog.

I chose the poster because I think it looks cool!

Check it out!

My writing this week!

This week we have been doing another writing challenge. This challenge is about the last week writing challenge were we had to get lots of points to get 30 minutes free time. I didn't beat my last week's points but its fine.

Here is my writing, check it out:

The winter writing

It’s a chilly, freezing day and as the snow quickly falls on the trees, the ground, the hot blooded animals appears out from their secret hideout and the king of winter is here.

‘Crunch,’ as the king of winter stomps on the clear, frozen, and slippery pathway, as he tries not to injure himself on the icy pathway.

As the cold wind pushes the  dried leaves from the tree the snow from it slowly goes down on the ground. The land is frozen like antarctica.

Some animals making noises and wandering around in the frozen place. Others are dying because of coldness.

The day has finally come to an end, the sun has set and now it stopped snowing and some animals are warm now.  

My Piece of hard work

This week we had been doing lots of reading and blooms task and if we have finished all the task we pick one task to post in our blogs and I picked this one because I feel like this is the longest reading tasks I did.

Please give me some positive feedback.

Here is my work, check it out:

Blooms:

Blooms 1: KC

1. Why did mum blamed Mr Fowles? Mum blamed Mr Fowles because her son was sick of the adjectives and things like that.
2. Why did the main character hate Mr Fowles? He hates Mr Fowles because Mr Fowles kept giving adjectives.
3. Was mum being to worried about him? Yes mum was being to worried about him.

Bloom 2: KA

1. Mum took him to a doctor
2. The doctor was explaining why he was getting sick of words
3. Shane and him fought
4. They went back home and mum kept complaining about Mr Fowles and the main character had to rinse his mouth
5. The police went to him and he asked how the burglar was like and he couldn’t describe him

Bloom 3: KB

Mum is a very loving mum. She is always worried about her young son.

She is too worried if something small happens to her son.

She has blond her and looks young. She wears a blue dress. She lives with her son and her husband.

Bloom 4: CA

1. Doctor - A person who helps sick people and works at a hospital.
2. Mum - A lady who raised you and takes care of you and who gave birth to you.
3. Biscuit - A different type of food. Can be small or big
4. Tall - A person or something is high

Bloom  5: EB

In my opinion I think this can happen in real life because a mum can be really worried and a person can get sick of tired of adjectives. Also people are different so that's why I think this can happen in real life.

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Other Blooms:

Bloom 1: KC

1. Main Character
2. Mum
3. Dad
4. Mr Fowles
5. Police Man
6. Burglar

Bloom 2: CA

Adjectives	Noun
Can describe lots of things Not the name of people and other things Adjectives are used to describe nouns	Not really can describe lots of things Nouns are names of people and other things Nouns are not used to describe adjectives

Bloom 3: AA

1. I can’t even say an adjective
2. My mum is really worried about me
3. I had to go to 4 doctors
4. I tried to beat shane
5. I am a teen
6. I am not allowed to talk to shane for 3 days

What am I? I am the main character

Bloom 4: AnB

Main Character	Shane
Trying to win too Mum is really worried Not that responsible for his things	Trying to win Mum is not that worried Is responsible for his things

Bloom 5: NIA

Poem:

Bloom 6: EA

I rate this text a 6 out of 10 because its interesting and I actually relate to this story and also because there are lots of adjectives in this text.

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Orientation:
Openining: The opening is they were in a doctors office because his mum was worried about him because he was not feeling well about the adjectives.

Problem: The main character couldn’t think of any adjective and that he gets sick of the adjectives. Also that he saw a burglar in his neighbours house.

Solution: The solution of the adjective was that he had to not go to school and he had to rinse his mouth all the time. The solution of the burglar was that he called the police.

Conclusion: The conclusion was that he just didn’t say anything to the police because he couldn’t think of any adjectives to describe the burglar.

Summary:

This week we have been reading a book called Weapons of Mass Description.

The author of the story is Anna Kenna.

The story is about a boy that hates adjectives and he needed to go see 4 doctors because his mum was really worried about him. Also that he had a fight with a boy called Shane because of the adjectives.

The problem was that he fought with Shane and that he saw a burglar in his neighbours house.

The story took place in the school,house, and the doctor's office and like the candy shop.

Shane and him didn’t talk to each other for three days and they didn’t fight anymore. He called the police of that the burglar could get caught.  

My Writing after 4 days

This week we had a writing challenge and we only had 3 days to complete it. The challenge is about whoever gets the most points they get to get free time today.
We had to do descriptive writing not just any type of writing and we had to include paragraphs too.
It was a lot of fun for me.

This is mine:

My Tasks with Mrs Thoms

On week 5 and n this week we have been reading this text called Dangerous Games and we did lots of fun things. We had to choose something that we made to put on our blogs and I chose the blooms task.

Here have a look at it!!

Dangerous Games:

Blooms:

Bloom 1: KA

List the Characters

1. Detective Minnie
2. Bodyguard / Dario
3. Bertha
4. Mirtha
5. Doctor Topps

Bloom 2: CA

Compare one thing to another thing

Body - Guard	Half Brother
Only protecting you Not that close with you Not a relative	Can protect you but not much Much closer to you A relative

Bloom 3: AA

Do what am I

What am I?

1. I am a not trustful
2. I will be going to jail
3. I made my half brother poisoned
4. I tried tricking the people that I was nice
5. I am very mean
6. I don’t like Detective Minnie

What am I? I am Bertha

Bloom 4: AnA

Write six sentences

Happy :)	Other -.-	Sad :(
Bertha got caught Bertha is going to jail now	Bertha pretended to be a nice person   Bertha’s bodyguard was her half brother	Bertha poisoned her bodyguard

Bloom 5: NIA

Do any type of poem or rap

Bloom 6: EA

Rate the text

I rate this text a 9 out 10 because its like mysterious and I really like texts like this one and it's really a good text to read for people who likes to read mysterious things like me.