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Monday, 23 December 2019

SLJ DAY 2:ONE SMALL STEP FOR MAN ACTIVITY 2

Poem:
Make me a spaceship dad
One that really fly
Let's take off to the sky.
I wanna take a trip to the moon.

We have landed on this rock now let's take one step on the moon. I feel no air on this rock. It feels just like it was yesterday that I took one step on this moon.

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2 comments:

  1. Emma SLJ27 December 2019 at 15:57

    Tena koe Eunize,

    Well done on completing another Summer Learning Journey blog post. You are doing great so keep it up.

    You have written a lovely poem about going to the moon. It flows well and I like how it rhymes.
    Would you like to go to the moon? I think it would be cool to see what it feels like to have no gravity however it could be a bit scary as well. What do you think?

    Until next time, happy blogging :)
    Emma

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  2. Mikey SLJ17 January 2020 at 14:10

    Hey Eunize,

    Congratulations on completing another activity! I really like how you've been able to make your poem rhyme - very clever. :)

    I just wanted to let you know that there's only one week left of the Summer Learning Journey. You've shared some great posts so far but I've noticed that you haven't been as active recently. There's still plenty of time to jump back online and have a go at some of the activities you haven't done yet - Emma and I would love to see them. :)

    Have a wonderful afternoon, Eunize. I do hope to see some more SLJ posts from you before the end of next week.

    Bye for now,

    Mikey

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