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Monday, 16 September 2019

The beach dogs!

Hi there last week we had a writing test and this week we have to write it in a google drawing and makes changes to it.

This is mine:

Please give feedback!

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  1. Naomi24 October 2019 at 13:50

    hello eunize
    i you have done a great job. I like the way you said as the dogs splashed in the blue sea

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