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Thursday, 16 May 2019

My Reading Work: Danger on the Copper Mountain

Hi there,                                         
this week in week three, we have been doing different tasks with two teachers which is with Mrs T and Ms McCormick. Basically we have been doing a lot of blooms tasks and we had to choose one of the tasks to share on our blog. I chose Danger on the Copper Mountain because I feel like this one is the shortest out of all the blooms task I've done.  This was fine for me because its kinda fun.

Please leave a positive comment and please give me some advice!

Here It is, check it out:

Blooms:

Bloom 1:
KA
  1. Alex
  2. Will
  3. Dad
  4. Ethan

Bloom 2:
CA

Mountain
Hill
  • Dangerous
  • Not that safe
  • More view
  • High
  • Kinda dangerous
  • Much safer
  • Not that much view
  • Not that high

Bloom 3:
AA
What am I?
  1. I am pretty
  2. I am huge
  3. I am a shape like a triangle
  4. I can be really high
  5. I can be in any countries
  6. I can be brown
What am I??
I am a Mountain!!

Bloom 4:
AnA

Happy :)
Sad :(
Other -.-
By the time Alex and Will had brought all the gear across, Ethan had changed into dry clothes

“It sure is beautiful” Ethan added
This is the fourth rainy day in a row

Alex and Ethan shouted Will’s name but he didn’t respond
Ethan Porter sat on his porch staring out at the rain

The plan was for Mr Marks to drop the boys off at Copper Mountain in the morning

Bloom 5:
NIA  
Take me to the Mountains for that's where I belong.
Just birds and trees and wind and leaves and silence as my song.

Bloom 6:
EA
I rate this text a 8 out of ten because it was great but in my opinion I think the problem was kinda late but this is a great story.

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