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Monday, 12 November 2018

Persuasive Writing

Persuasive Writing

I strongly think that fireworks shouldn’t be sold to people that uses them for their own displays. I think that fireworks should only be used for public displays.

I feel this way because  maybe people gets really injured and also animals and pets can die by the firework hitting them and also when people gets silly with them it can cause a lot of issue like it might burn the whole house

One story that shows how dangerous home fireworks can be is when our teacher Miss Thomason told us a story about her friend that was a boy he was being silly about fireworks and he got his 3 fingers cut off and he had to call the ambulance by his own.

Conclusion
So, after all of these amazing and clear reasons, I strongly feel that fireworks should not be sold out to people that use them by their own.



1 comment:

  1. Hi Eunize, it's Qyn.
    I really like the way that you told us way we should only see fireworks in public display.
    next time perhaps maybe you could make your font bigger.
    this reminds me of when my Dad and my brothers and i when to see fireworks in Rolleston.

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